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Can I get some feedback on my essay? I'm not finished. You might have to download it

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Yeonjunx
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  • 03-11-2020

Answer:

hmm it seems good, just improve on vocabulary, correctness of information (make sure the information you have are correct). Also are your paragraphs in the correct order?

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hi, im new can I get marked as brainlieser? Im not forcing you but it would be highly appreciated.

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